Before I can
deliberate about forms and techniques of arrangement, and to explain why I
attempted to craft “some kind of scheme of superior arrangement” to convey my
message, I must point out a quote from Podis: “…not only is an effective
arrangement achieved through an understanding of purpose, but so too may
purpose itself be better understood through a refinement of arrangement.” I
tried to refine the arrangement of Podis’ text to “underscore the main idea”.
Podis suggests organization as a coherent and teachable sequence, of some
practical principles like chronological, spatial, and logical progressions and
patterns, which fluent writers use in arranging their material.
When helping
students at the Writing Center, I’ve identified many students demonstrating the
same problems with their writing, especially Podis’ second principle of
arrangement. They often can’t connect the same ideas or comments about a
determined issue in a concise way. As a result, when proofreading, the
information is chopped and students become frustrated because they think they
can’t convey their point across. I found out that the biggest challenge students
face is to find a thesis statement. According to Podis,
the first practical principle is function and organization, requiring a consciously
crafted scheme of superior arrangements, which the writer must first discover what
best highlights the point or thesis of the paper. The second principle is
concerned with the idea of grouping items, and the third principle concentrates
more on the interrelationship of items or groups of items, establishing a
progression of the thesis, if the writer can discover one.
On the other hand,
Lindemann suggests arrangement in a shape of discourse through the
examination of organizational schemes implicit in heuristics, adopting
conventional forms, making and fulfilling promises to readers, block plans, and
D'Angelo's paradigms to illustrate that the process of shaping discourse begins
with prewriting and continues through rewriting.
Lindemann states that the arrangement of material in
prescribed ways, according to patterns
sanctioned by convention and tradition. In these contexts, effective
communication depends partly on writing-by-formula; and prescribed patterns of
organization, then, serve a useful purpose, especially when time or tradition
limits the choices writers have in shaping their work. Though, she focuses
primarily on organizing a kind of writing that allows students more time to
discover their purpose and message and that permits several options for
arranging the material. Including most self-expressive writing and responses to
assignments in many composition, creative writing, and journalism classes, the
kind of writing students and professionals do whenever the audience considers
as organizational patterns acceptable.
But as Lindemann points out, “although we rarely pay
attention to how the world around us is organized, form is everywhere” and “students
who cling to a model usually do not know they have choices about form, what
those choices are, or how to choose wisely”. To add to her point, Podis states that “there is, no single correct,
predetermined organizational scheme for any given essay, but rather a superior
or inferior alternative of arrangements, because what works for one paper will
not necessarily work well for another. Arrangement is integrally related to the
thesis or purpose of an essay and to be more efficient, is necessary to apply
the principle of grouping likes with likes.”
By rearranging the
message from the text, I used my own technique to help me organize the
information, or translate, to a sequence that makes sense for me. Different
writers have their own ways to convey a message, find out what they want say,
or where they stand on a determined issue. But until writers becomes more
experienced, rearranging a message or grouping it by connecting ideas in a
concisely way, is challenge that many will face.
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