I am solid about the
issue, and how to address it. I am solid about my audience and on my argument.
Also, I am solid on my sources, and how they support my thesis. I am not so
solid yet on my closing, but I am working on it.
My argument states
that most academically successful children have solid hard and soft skills and
few social and emotional stresses. Solid hard and soft skills, fewer emotional
stresses result from playtime. Therefore, academically successful children
result from playtime. There are at least four sources that support my claim. I
have included two other sources that counter the necessity of play during
school hours but do not take in consideration my point of view. To make sure
that my readers understand the purpose of each paragraph, I’ve included the
thesis on my introduction and argued each point respectively on the paragraphs.
I believe that my
essay will engage readers, because not many people perceived the importance of
play. Many people have the assumption that play is a privilege or a form of
entertainment. My introduction engages readers with my argument and address initial
concerns and my transitions help readers move from one paragraph to the next. I am working on my conclusion sum up my
argument and end memorably for readers.
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